果林昀潔英文自我介紹

大家好，我的名字是李昀潔，
我今年10歲，我喜歡玩電腦和畫圖，
就讀校是果林國小，
請大家多多指教！！
Hello everybody.
My name is Judy.
I am 10 years.
I like play computer and draw.
I study in Guolin eleprimary school.
Thank！

建議:
Hello, everybody.
My name is Judy.
I am 10 years old.
I like to play computer and draw pictures.
I study in Guolin Elementary School.
Thank you!