果林昀潔英文自我介紹

大家好，我的名字是李昀潔，
我今年10歲，我喜歡玩電腦和畫圖，
就讀校是果林國小，
謝謝！！
Hello everybody.
My name is Judy.
I am 10 years old.
I like playing computer and drawing.
I am studying in Guolin Elementary School.
Thank you！

建議:
Hello, everybody.
My name is Judy.
I am 10 years old.
I like playing computer and drawing.
I am studying in Guolin Elementary School.
Thank you!