嗨!!
我叫winnie，
讀果林國小，
喜歡睡覺、吃美食，
希望能和大家成為好朋友~
Hi! !
I call winnie,
reads fruit Lin Kuohsiao,
likes sleeping,
eating the good food,hoped can become the friend with everybody
建議:
Hi!
I am Winnie.
I study in Guolin Elementary School.
I love sleeping and eat delicious food.
I hope I can become a friend to everybody.
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Hi! !
I call winnie,
reads fruit Lin Kuohsiao,
likes sleeping,
eating the good food,hoped can become the friend with everybody.
英語中介紹名字的用法是
My name is
並不是I call
Call 有打電話等...的意思。
在果林國小讀書
不是
reads fruit Lin Kuohsiao,
而是
I study in Goulin elementary School(Primary school).
我喜歡睡覺、吃美食、
非僅是
likes sleeping,
eating the good food
應該改成
I love sleeping、eating gourmet food.
我希望我們可以成為好朋友
不是
,hoped can become the friend with everybody.
改成
I hope we could be a good friends.
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