竹圍國小陳景修Jim自我介紹Introduction

Hello! Every one!大家好！
My name is Jim 我的名字是Jim
I am a Chinese.我是華人
I live in Tauyan我住桃園
My birthday is on July 7TH我的生日是7月7日
I'm eleven years old （我今年11歲）
I am a student of jhuwei elementary 我是竹圍國小的學生
There are five members in my family, my father, my mother, my brother, my sister, and me.
My hobbies are play computer games and swiming 我的興趣是玩電腦，游泳
My favorie food is ice cream我最喜灣的食物是冰淇淋
My favorite subject is sport我最喜歡的科目是體育
The thing I most hope is to become dentists我最期望的是成為牙醫

建議:
Hello! Everyone!
I live in Taoyuan.
I am a student of Jhuwei Elementary.
There are five members in my family.
My father, mother, brother, sister and me.
My hobbies are playing computer games and swimming.
The thing I hope most is to become a dentist.